|
Post by eleven on Jul 15, 2010 17:33:56 GMT -5
Let’s get the basics down first.
Name: Marluxia Nicknames: Number Eleven, The Graceful Assassin, Lord of Castle Oblivion Age: exact age unknown, appears early to mid twenties Gender: Male Race: Nobody Homeworld: Homeworld: Unknown, Current Residence: The World That Never Was, Castle Oblivion Alliance: Shadow
You’re just a puppet aren’t you? Played By: Eleven Age: 21 Gender: Male Contact: MSN, PM Audition Link: Here Other: Pink is a Manly Red
So tell me a little bit about yourself.
Physical Aspects: Marluxia retains a very beautiful and graceful presence, as befitting his title. While his appearance isn't as physically intimidating as members such as Lexaeus or Xaldin, he is one of the more powerful members of the group. He stands just barely taller than Axel, however is shorter than the likes of Numbers One, Three, Four and Five. Sapphire blue eyes, pink layered locks and somewhat feminine features deceptively hide his immense power, true to his personality and nature. Like all members of the Order of Thirteen Marluxia dons the black cloak with a silver zipper up the middle and silver chains upon the neckline. His outfit is complete with the black gloves, boots and black pants worn underneath the cloak.
Persona: - Façade: On the outside Marluxia keeps a calm demeanor, this is probably due to the true emotionless state of being a Nobody and probably comes natural to the Assassin. He's very vain and arrogant, although his demeanor when speaking is normally very calm. This is best shown when he taunted Axel after being confronted for his treason against the Organization, and left him there to fight Sora.
More often than not he is polite to those whom he speaks to, even his enemies. He retains a graceful demeanor on the outside, and pays a great amount of attention to detail and appearance. He tends to take great pride in his appearance, and is often surrounded by cherry blossoms whenever he removes his hood, or transports himself with his unique ability to teleport.
He gives long, overly dramatic speeches like Xemnas does, and possesses a very dull, monotone like voice as well. This shows that he normally doesn't pretend to have emotions unlike the majority of the Organization, however he is known to laugh and smirk on occasion.
- Inner Mind: Within a mind that is nothing short of cunning, calculative and intelligent, Marluxia is deceptive to the core. Almost all of his actions and thoughts are directed towards benefiting himself and his own ambitions. His most prominent one of course would be seizing power of the Organization, however power and completion are also factors that help fill out the top 3 of his want list. Marluxia is very manipulative, and often uses his graceful ways with words to con others into giving him information, and put others in their place.
He is not shown to be fond of the founding members, and the feeling is mutual, however Marluxia speaks to them in a proper manner in their presence to throw them off of his inner workings. Yet it is shown that he has no respect for any of them, a perfect example would be when he insulted Vexen's worth and his project to the Nobody's face.
Marluxia has an apparent obsession with superiority, as he often used his status in Castle Oblivion to keep them all in check. This is best shown when Marluxia manipulated Vexen to fight Sora, by using his fear of Xemnas against him. He is a persistent member of the Organization, not losing sight of his goals and remaining devoted to them until the very end. He's very adamant, and believes that he is entitled to so much more respect than he is given. He will stop at nothing to overthrow the Organization and make it his own.
Empty your pockets and show me what you got
Items: (List any items you wish to purchase)
Inventory: Any items such as keychains, and Synthesis materials, as well as plot items go here.
Stand up and fight.
Weapon(s): Graceful Dahlia - A large scythe with a vicious, yet beautiful pink blade. The pole of the weapon is a pale green, which complements the rest of the weapon so well that it appears to be a flower in bloom. Marluxia uses this with great skill, letting all perish within its arc except the blossoming petals that are created in it's wake.
ABILITIES SECTION:
[Deathscythe] [Marluxia swings forward his scythe, creating large pink scars in the ground near the opponent's feet. After the tear in the earth is formed, pink energy shall erupt from them to harm the opponent. There is but a second of pause between the forming of the tear and the sudden eruption of energy. Marluxia can do this three times in succession, creating a total of six attacks.]
Range: Scars are 4-6 feet in length, Erupting energy reaches as high as six feet Speed: instantaneous after scythe is swung Cooldown: 2 Uses: 3 Strength: Weak
[Crescent Wave] [Marluxia will swing his scythe forward, and unleash pink crescent arcs of energy towards his opponent. Depending on how he swings his weapon, the energy will be horizontal or vertical.]
Range: waves travel at 5 feet per second Speed: How fast is it? How fast does it make you go? Etc. Cooldown: 2 Uses: 4 Strength: Weak
[Flower Storm] [Marluxia will create three petal whirlwinds that spread out around the area in a circular motion. The whirlwinds themselves are pink in color and have a five foot radius, reaching a height of eight feet from the ground. If the enemy is caught in one he/she will receive extensive damage. Then while they are trapped Marluxia will strike with his scythe.]
Range: Each whirlwind remains active for a good several minutes before subsiding and returning to nothing. Speed: Instantaneous when Marluxia activates the ability. Each whirlwind's speed is approximately 30 mph. Cooldown: 3 Uses: 3 Strength: Weak
Everybody’s got a weakness or two; what are yours?
Elemental Weakness: Light Other Weaknesses: n/a
What’s your story?
Marluxia came into the Organization as the eleventh member, found by Xigbar and Xaldin on one of their recruitment missions. He proved to be a worthy member of the ranks, showing great power and skill with his newly acquired powers. It is never said who named this Nobody, but one could assume that it had to have been Xemnas.
Marluxia was assigned to teach Roxas how to use his keyblade, and took the newest member to Twilight Town to begin his training with the weapon. As Roxas demonstrated exemplary skill with the Keyblade, Marluxia began to see just how powerful the tool was. He was exceptionally polite with Roxas during this mission, taking his time to explain the difference between pure blood and emblem Heartless to the younger Nobody. He also explains the release of hearts to him, and how they will have come together to weave Kingdom Hearts. After the mission, the two RTC. Afterwards, the Castle Oblivion teams are dispatched to the secondary base of operations.
Marluxia was assigned the title of Lord of Castle Oblivion by Xemnas, unknown to the former that it was merely a way to show the Assassin's traitorous ways to the rest of the Organization. He formulated a plot with Larxene, as well as Axel, to overthrow the Organization with the use of Naminé, a mysterious girl with a power over memory. With her power they would rewrite Sora's memories to replace Kairi with Namine, and then use him to defeat the senior members of the group. However senior members Zexion, Lexaeus and Vexen were placed in the lower levels of the castle to counteract Marluxia's plot.
The Assassin led Sora and his friends to the castle, explaining to them in riddle that they were to journey deeper into Castle Oblivion. Marluxia, along with his two allies, continued to feed Sora false information in hopes to lure him farther into the castle so that Naminé could continue her manipulation of his memories. They each fought him at least once without using their full strength and willingly forfeit the fights, as well as using the replica of Riku to compete against Sora for Naminé. Marluxia and Larxene eventually discover Vexen's relay of information back to numbers Five and Six in the basement levels.
After Vexen's loss of control over the Replica, Marluxia appears before him and the other two (Larxene and Axel) to inform Number Four that his project was a failure. Vexen protested in an arrogant manner, to which Marluxia replied with a threat of telling The Superior of the blond's failed project. He then continued on to tell Vexen that the nobody could not defeat Sora by himself, though Vexen proclaimed that none of them could understand his true might. This Marluxia had to see, and so he challenged the Chilly Academic to prove it. After Vexen disappeared to face Sora, Marluxia orders Axel to eliminate him so that he does not spill too much information to the Keyblade Wielder.
Soon after Vexen's elimination, Marluxia turns his attention to Axel after he learns of the pyro's assistance in Naminé's escape. This ended the restructuring of Sora's memories, and so ruins the plot to use Sora against the Organization. Larxene is killed shortly after this by Sora, following her attack on him. Marluxia then finds himself confronted by Axel, and is disgusted by Axel's betrayal. The two fought, with Marluxia having displayed his incredible speed, but both appeared matched evenly in power. Neither emerged from the brief duel with any injuries, and it ended abruptly when Marluxia summoned forth Naminé to use as a shield. As if on cue Sora then entered the room behind Axel, to which Marluxia told that Axel wished to harm Naminé and disappeared to the higher levels of the castle.
After Sora's defeat of Axel, Marluxia found himself face to face with the hero in the deepest chambers of the castle. He ordered Naminé to completely erase Sora's memory, so that he could reconstruct him into something more of his liking. She flat out refused, even after the Assassin had threatened her existence. Marluxia becomes confused as Sora requests that Naminé do so for her own safety, and even more when the Riku Replica attacks. He was infuriated that the replica and Sora would willingly accept the memories of Naminé even with knowing that they were lies, so he then attacked them. Marluxia was seemingly destroyed, but he was within another chamber having his clone fight for him. Sora came into the chamber, sensing the great power that the Nobody was wielding, for the final confrontation.
After a very long and exhausting battle, in which Marluxia used his large machine nobody and Angelic avatar-like nobody, he was defeated by Sora. In his final moments he reached out to Sora, but faded away into nothingness. This made him the fourth Organization member to fall within the ranks, which violently shook the castle upon his defeat.
It all comes down to this: make your choice.
You are presented with three weapons: a sword, a staff, and a shield. The sword represents the power of the warrior; invincible courage comes with this weapon as well as horrible destruction. The staff represents the power of the mystic; inner strength comes with this weapon as well as wonder and ruin. The shield represents the power of the guardian; kindness to aid friends comes with this weapon as well as a shield that will repel all.
Which one will you choose?
Chosen Weapon: Sword
Swift Blow Swinging your weapon with all of your might, you achieve speeds unlike any other you have ever obtained. Your weapon glows faintly as you smash, slash, hack, stab, or otherwise injure your foe with greater speed than normal.
Range: Melee Speed: 2x swing speed Cooldown: 4 posts Uses: 2 uses Strength: Weak
[/size]
|
|
Matt
Senior Member
D:<[/color][M:885]
Posts: 299
|
Post by Matt on Jul 15, 2010 18:05:18 GMT -5
Sooo, umm... Once again someone has misunderstood the abilities. : /
1 Strong, or 1 Moderate and 1 Weak, or 3 Weak. That is what you may have to start with. However you may purchase additional abilities and upgrade those that you already have later on.
Fix that... And you should be good. Though I feel the need to point out that Vexen is clearly taller than Marluxia. ; P
(Seriously though. He is.)
|
|
|
Post by eleven on Jul 15, 2010 18:19:32 GMT -5
alright, I changed the abilities so now they're all weak...for now haha. In other words, edits made.
|
|
Matt
Senior Member
D:<[/color][M:885]
Posts: 299
|
Post by Matt on Jul 15, 2010 18:41:15 GMT -5
Okay then, everything looks good then. xD
Accepted, Locked, and Moved!
|
|