Myka Freydan

[darkmirror]

Let’s get the basics down first.

Name: Myka Freydan
Nicknames: Optional.
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Race: Human/ Other (She has wings but she doesn't know what she is)
Homeworld: Olympus Coliseum
Alliance: Light

You’re just a puppet aren’t you?

Played By: DarkMirror
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Contact: PM

So tell me a little bit about yourself.

Physical Aspects:
Picture
Myka is about 5’7”, 120lbs of pure muscle. Hazel eyes and long, mahogany brown hair.

Persona

Façade: Myka appears to everyone as a fighter and an orphan. No one gets close to her accept in training and tournaments. With this Myka has become hard on the outside and reserved. She is very loyal to her cause and will not detour from her path until it is over. She is, or would be, very protective over those around her and do whatever it took to keep them safe, taking all the danger on her.


Inner Mind: Myka feels alone in the world. She has never had any friends and has always been an outsider. She is scared about what could happen to the world and feels a need to be doing something to help. She is pretty good about keeping her emotions inside, not showing how lost she is. Her fighting instincts gives her the drive to survive and also the need to find answers and it hides her fears.

Empty your pockets and show me what you got

Items: (List any items you wish to purchase)

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Inventory: Any items such as keychains, and Synthesis materials, as well as plot items go here.

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Stand up and fight.

Weapon(s): Heron


ABILITIES SECTION:

[Ability One Name] Flight
[Ability One Description] Has wings

Range: 8-10 miles
Speed: 150-175 mph
Cooldown: Going that fast 6 posts
Uses: Once or twice a day (normal speed anytime)
Strength: Moderate can't carry anyone

[Ability Two Name] Healing
[Ability Two Description]

Range: Barely able to heal a broken bone
Speed: 1/2 to 1 hour to heal bones
Cooldown: 4-6 posts
Uses: Pretty much unlimited for minor wounds. One for broken bones per week
Strength: Weak

Everybody’s got a weakness or two; what are yours?

Elemental Weakness: Fire
Other Weaknesses: Low self-esteem
What’s your story?

Myka has no family. She was found by Phil, who took her under his wing. He taught her the sword in his spare time but hasn't had a big enough influence ot be considered "family". However Myka is smart and has learn most of her skills on her own by shear determination. Nevertheless, Myuka has always been an outsider to the rest of the Coliseum and really hasn't been included in anything and has no honest to goodness friends.

Nevertheless, Myka is determined to know what is going on in the world and to somehow play her part. So finally she bucks up the courage to leave the Coliseum. She takes a Gummi Ship, not telling anyone that she is going, and lands in a new World.
It all comes down to this: make your choice.


You are presented with three weapons: a sword, a staff, and a shield. The sword represents the power of the warrior; invincible courage comes with this weapon as well as horrible destruction. The staff represents the power of the mystic; inner strength comes with this weapon as well as wonder and ruin. The shield represents the power of the guardian; kindness to aid friends comes with this weapon as well as a shield that will repel all.

Which one will you choose?

Chosen Weapon: Staff

[darkmirror]

I hope this works!

[Oathkeeper Emi]

I'm thinking the abilities need some work. The flight ability needs more detail in the description, and honestly the rest of it is kind of confusing to me. 150-175 is like REALLY fast, and you need to be more specific about the uses. "Once or twice" isn't acceptable. What is "normal speed"? The range has the same problem as the speed, you need to pick something and stick with it.

The second ability doesn't even have a description and think its a little over powered to be a weak ability. You could move what you have in range to the description but even then it needs to be fleshed out a lot. Unlimited uses for healing as a weak ability doesn't seem right to me. If I was writing this ability I would probably say that you could heal minor wounds from weak attacks/abilities and give it a set use amount per battle. Also, the cool down needs a set number just like I said before.

Fix that and we'll go from there. Also, if any other staff has something they want to say, go ahead.

[Administrator]

Well, a problem I have is the Phil part of your history. We don't allow people to have canons in their past, because if someone were to take the canon, it limits their creativity. However, if someone takes Phil and you gain their permission to mention the canon, that is all right.

EDIT: I didn't notice on first read, but you need something else in there for Physical Aspects. We need more than a picture and bare specifics.

[darkmirror]

I'm just slightly lost in this site. Its not like other that I've RPGed with. I'll try again! ^.^

[Fate]

It's all right-- we work a tiny bit differently and we're always glad to help. If you need any help with anything you don't understand, feel free to give one of the staffers a yell; that's what we're here for after all.

Also, you don't have to make a new thread for this. You can just edit your post and just tell us that you've edited it so we can look over it again. It saves you a bit of time and it saves us from having to jump between threads.

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[darkmirror]

Thanks! Really I meaning it but I don't think that this site is right for me. I have no idea what its about. If I had played the game it would be a different story. I'm sorry for the trouble I've caused.

[Fate]

You don't necessarily have to play the games. Sure, that helps a lot, but there is always the Kingdom Hearts Wikipedia page, which Emi posted in the Resources section; that Wiki explains everything in explicit detail so you almost don't have to play the games.

But ultimately, it's your choice. I just don't like seeing so much work go to waste. <<

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[Ain_Soph_Aur]

DarkMirror is leaving the site and I doubt she will be back. I suggest moving the character to the "Denied/Deleted" section just in case.