Saix

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Let’s get the basics down first.

Name: Saix
Nicknames: Luna Diviner
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Race: Nobody
Homeworld: The World That Never Was
Alliance: Shadow

You’re just a puppet aren’t you?

Played By: Angel
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Contact: PM
Audition Link: Here
Other: Anything else you want us to know? Optional.

So tell me a little bit about yourself.

Physical Aspects:

Saix is 5'11", with yellow eyes and pointed ears. He has a scar in the shape of an X on his forehead. He wears a long black cloak, the uniform of the Organization. His long blue hair is somewhat wild on the top but smooths out below that, extending a little past his shoulders with two tendrils in the front.

Persona:

• Façade: Saix appears as the most emotionless member of Organization XIII next to Xemnas. He is very aware that every emotion Nobodies claim to feel is just a ruse based on the memories of emotions. Because of this, he holds disdain for those who feign emotion, especially those who have fooled themselves into thinking that their emotions are even somewhat genuine. Friendship itself is pointless to him, as any sort of friendship made after becoming a Nobody is pointless and fake. He himself is a cold, efficient, and ruthless operative. The only thing he shows any sort of drive for is regaining his heart, a goal which he never stops pursuing.
  
  However, under the influence of the moon, he loses his calm and becomes a savage, unrestrained fighter, charging recklessly into battle.
  
  
• Inner Mind: Saix's mind is cold and logical, untouched by the emotion that so many members of the Organization pretend to feel. In the direst of circumstances, he maintains his calm, being completely unaffected by most events. He has no reaction to the emotion of humans, no matter how extreme it is. In essence, he is the embodiment of the textbook definition of a Nobody- a creature that can not feel emotion. It is because of his acute awareness of the falsity of Nobodies' emotions that he is so determined to regain his heart, and with it his ability to feel.
  
  When he enters his berserker state, he loses his calm along with his mind and will destroy whatever's in his path until the effects of the moon wear off.

Empty your pockets and show me what you got

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Stand up and fight.

Weapon(s):

Lunatic, Saix's claymore. The Lunatic has a smooth, white handle with a gray spike in its pommel and a pale blue blade. The tip is connected to the main blade by a pale yellow symbol shaped like the top half of the Nobody logo.

When Saïx enters his berserker state, the tip of the Lunatic is divided into two large halves with large spikes protruding from them.


ABILITIES SECTION:

Berserker
Under the influence of the moon, Saix experiences a 5X increase in strength and defense at the cost of his self-control. While in this state, his movement and attacks are 3X faster and he is able to perform a combo which ends in him slamming his claymore into the ground, creating three large shockwaves which shoot out in different directions 4 yards from the point of impact (60 mph speed). This combo is the strength of a moderate ability, and can only be used once. This effect lasts for five posts, and weakens Saix when it wears off. If Berserker is used in daylight, Saix experiences a weakening X0.75 in strength and speed for two posts after the effect wears off.

Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Cooldown: 3 posts in light of full moon, 5 posts otherwise.
Uses: 3 uses
Strength: Super-strong

Everybody’s got a weakness or two; what are yours?

Elemental Weakness: Light
Other Weaknesses: After his berserker state, Saix takes a while to recover.

What’s your story?

Saix is the Nobody of Isa, a man who was once friends with Lea, who's Nobody became Axel. For a while, they remained close after joining the Organization, having a secret plan to overthrow it for the eventual goal of obtaining their hearts. They worked together for a while, Axel helping Saix get rid of the "useless" members of the Organization in Castle Oblivion. However, Saix had changed a lot when he became a Nobody, and Axel grew distant from him, preferring the company of Roxas. Saix did not react in any significant way to losing Axel's friendship, and abandoned their plan without a second thought.

He served as Xemnas's second-in-command for a long time, proving to be a cold and efficient operative. He manipulated Sora and his friends to complete their ultimate goal of finishing Xemnas's synthetic Kingdom Hearts, and planned to destroy Sora once it was completed. When it had been completed, Saix fought him in an attempt to destroy him, but was defeated in battle and ceased to exist- until now.

It all comes down to this: make your choice.

You are presented with three weapons: a sword, a staff, and a shield. The sword represents the power of the warrior; invincible courage comes with this weapon as well as horrible destruction. The staff represents the power of the mystic; inner strength comes with this weapon as well as wonder and ruin. The shield represents the power of the guardian; kindness to aid friends comes with this weapon as well as a shield that will repel all.

Which one will you choose?

Chosen Weapon: Sword

Swift Blow
Swinging your weapon with all of your might, you achieve speeds unlike any other you have ever obtained. Your weapon glows faintly as you smash, slash, hack, stab, or otherwise injure your foe with greater speed than normal.

Range: Melee
Speed: 2x swing speed
Cooldown: 4 posts
Uses: 2 uses
Strength: Weak

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[Matt]

Almost everything looks good to go. My only questions are about the ability.

To start with, there's the combo mentioned in the ability that he can perform while in it. Well how much damage does this do? That of a Weak ability? Can it be used non-stop?

Personally, I think you could stand to move the speed of the ability up to x2. In KH2, Saix probably moved faster than x2, but we wouldn't want to overpower the ability too much. Of course, I think you could stand to increase the cool down a little as it is. The way you have it, he can be in Beserk almost as long as it takes him to cool down.

Also, I'm wondering how you could incorporate the moon into this. For example: In the moonlight the cooldown is only 4 posts, with otherwise it's 6 posts.

But I'll stop rambling now of course to see what you have to say.


EDIT: Okay, I think we've gotten this all straightened out now.

Accepted, Locked, and Moved!