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Post by dandy on Oct 13, 2010 6:46:58 GMT -5
Let’s get the basics down first.
Name: Fomorian Nicknames: Age: A little over a year. Gender: Gender Neutral Race: Heartless Homeworld:End of the World Alliance:Darkness, or as say on Hyakuji… DARKNESS!!!
You’re just a puppet aren’t you? Played By: Dandy Age: 16 Gender: Just to be clear. Contact: PM Audition Link: N/A Other: This is Yasu’s/Mac’s heartless. Everything is better with super robots/power suits. With this being fanfic, I figured that I could go wild. My favorite manga is currently Go Nagai’s UFO Robo Grendizer… okay.
Theme: Writhe in Pain (Millia’s Theme)- Daisuke Ishiwatari
So tell me a little bit about yourself.
Physical Aspects:
As the name suggest, Fomorian is a giant humanoid at about twelve feet tall, but monstrously top heavy. But more specifically, not unlike another certain heartless, it is looks not unlike a suit of armor. Decorations on the head are not unlike that of a samurai helmet, while multiple wedges protrude on the shoulder and arm guards. However, there is also a more mechanical motif; visible bolts sport the chest and waist, while it’s joints are spherical. It can even open it’s chest, revealing a miniature Corridor to the Darkness to the inside of it. Despite its artificial appearance, there isn’t a manufacturing label on its body; it’s a Pureblood. This may be reflexive of the strength belonging to the heart that created it, unlike the Emblem which usually have an appearance that is largely dependant on the environment. Unlike many of the more unique heartless, it does retain the signature glowing yellow eyes.
Persona: - Façade: Fomorian is a Heartless so specialized it it’s hunting patterns that many might not recognize it as one. On the surface, it appears to be a servant robot, though one obedient to certain strong hearted individuals. Many may be disappointed in that it is fickle in its choice of master. However, when the master is outside of the Fomorian, it will obey almost unquestionably obey the master’s orders, following him or her like a puppy, with no rebellion or self defense, simply chooses inaction if it refuses. Without a master or hope of obtaining one, it is a coward, despite its size, reluctant to defend itself. It is generally hide the best it can and frequently observes people. Unlike other Heartless, it has grown a grave, rational fear of Keyblade wielders, repulsed instead of attracted to them; it has some idea of when it is out of its league. Without someone controlling it, it is improbable that it attack anyone.
Fomorian’s ability also gives it some more advanced behaviors. While certainly, not it words, it does try to beckon its potential masters, attempting sending a sort of feeling of magnetism toward it, generally with the attraction to safety or power. However, the offer will be most obvious when it opens up its chest cabinet. When the master is in, Fomorian will act as a voice it in the head of the master, acting as a tempter of sorts.. It is also when the master is inside Fomorian that it seems to have guts to attack on it’s own then limited free will, and do so in a more the typical heartless fashion.
- Inner Mind: Fomorian’s behavior is really just mostly just an extension of a basic Heartless behavior: follow those with strongest, darkness leaning hearts, stay close to them, and feast when the time is right. Where Fomorian differs is in that is more of a parasite, gaining sustenance from bringing a heart closer and closer to the darkness. Being a simple heartless, what it “says” to its master are not its own thoughts. They are simply magnifications of ones are already in the master’s head, ones that could lead the master further down the path to Darkness. In fact, if there is one more human quality about it, on could say it is also sort of lazy in that it relies on others fighting through it get hearts the old fashioned, destructive way.
Empty your pockets and show me what you got
Items:
Inventory:
Stand up and fight.
Weapon(s): None naturally, but it’s ability forges a shadowy version of whatever weapon its master wields. ABILITIES SECTION:
[Armor, Sword and Steed] [What makes Fomorian different from other heartless is that provides a service; it is a tool. Or you could think of it as a fusion dance/forming like Voltron.
It can open a Corridor of Darkness into the inside of its body, inside which the master can have limited control of it‘s body, and can be exited at any time. It can easily be demolished from the inside out, but takes the risk because it will only willfully take in those of a Darkness of Shadow aligned heart. It leaves itself highly vulnerable to everyone it considers a master. In a single post, one disable it completely for the rest of the thread without my permission. With my permission… FINISH HIM. FATALITY!
The details of the control are what make it like an armor. They are in a pitch black room, only lit by the likeness of a screen, displaying everything Fomorian sees. Although his or her own body need not move, he or she can control Fomorian as if it were an extension of their own; it even replicates his or her abilites and weapons in proportion to it‘s size (Something like range and speed x Fomorian/master’s height), though not able to replicate a character‘s weapons abilities when he or she is not inside him. The strength of attacks are increased by a level. However, it is sporadic, control hoping back and forth between the master and Fomorian (ex posting. Master, guy 1, guy 2, Fomorian, guy 1, guy 2, Master, guy 1, guy 2, etc.). Thankfully, it is seems to be able to study the master well enough to get an understanding of what is trying to do, and maintains access to the master’s weapons and abilities. External (so you would pop out safely if you destroyed from the inside out) damage is shared between Fomorian and the master.
It should be noted that every time someone uses Fomorain, they pulled a little closer to Darkness, and often feel drained afterwards.]
Range: N/A Speed: N/A. Cooldown: Passive Uses: Passive Strength: Strong
[Ability Two Name] [Ability Two Description]
Range: How far does it go? What are the ranged limitations? How large is any explosion? Etc. Speed: How fast is it? How fast does it make you go? Etc. Cooldown: How many posts before you can use it again? Uses: How many times can it be used? If passive, then put passive here. Strength: Weak, Moderate, or Strong in strength?
[Ability Three Name] [Ability Three Description]
Range: How far does it go? What are the ranged limitations? How large is any explosion? Etc. Speed: How fast is it? How fast does it make you go? Etc. Cooldown: How many posts before you can use it again? Uses: How many times can it be used? If passive, then put passive here. Strength: Weak, Moderate, or Strong in strength?
Everybody’s got a weakness or two; what are yours?
Elemental Weakness: Ice, Lightning, and Light. Other Weaknesses: Completely incompetent without a master; relies on having one for any hunting and sustenance in general. It’s size and weight also severely limit it’s mobility.
What’s your story?
Fomorian was born from the Darkness in the heart of a wet behind the ears wizard named Yasu. Oneday he was separated from the rest of the Hollow Bastion Restoration committee during a battle, and forced to fight a swarm of heartless on his own. As the battle dragged on for over an hour, he cursed his allies, absent when he need them most, and was fueled by his sense of duty to serve and rebuild his homeland. However, in the process, something happened. The nobody became a malformation of the original’s personae, while the heartless became followed the inner serving nature of Yasu’s heart.
Its initial few weeks of traditional hunting were unfruitful until it wandered into Radiant Garden’s . There it happened found it quickly happened upon an old married couple of spellcasters, sensing the Darkness in their hearts forming of jealousy, it’s instincts reveled to it truth of it’s own power. The husband took to it, using what he fought was a magical tool to fight heartless for the new Radiant Garden Restoration Committee. However, the wife witnessed his eventual descent into madness, learning the truth about the Fomorian, and writing of her observations on the new breed of Heartless. It wasn’t long before Fomorian was chased from Radiant Gardens, but that was only after the wife became a widow.
Since then, Fomorian has been wandering in search of the strongest, and vulnerable hearts it can find to offer its services too. Although a mere beast at this state, its intelligence is growing rapidly for a Heartless, becoming well aware of its niche and how to preserve its own life.
It all comes down to this: make your choice.
You are presented with three weapons: a sword, a staff, and a shield. The sword represents the power of the warrior; invincible courage comes with this weapon as well as horrible destruction. The staff represents the power of the mystic; inner strength comes with this weapon as well as wonder and ruin. The shield represents the power of the guardian; kindness to aid friends comes with this weapon as well as a shield that will repel all.
Which one will you choose?
Chosen Weapon: Fomorian cowers behind the shield
Guard Placing your weapon or shield in a defensive position, you block the efforts of a Weak ability and nullify it. This symbolizes the defensive properties of the Shield, and is broken by Guard Break.
Range: Melee Speed: N/A Cooldown: 2 posts Uses: 2 Strength: Weak
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Post by Lagunamov on Oct 13, 2010 15:05:52 GMT -5
Interesting concept. Got a few questions, mainly based on the ability you gave Formorian.
"In a single post, one disable it completely for the rest of the thread without my permission. With my permission… FINISH HIM. FATALITY!"
First, I'm not quite sure what you meant to say here. Does that mean it can't be disabled without permission, and if that were the case, there would be consequences?
Second, how is the damage shared between Formorian and whoever is inside? Is it split 50-50, or in some other proportion? Like,, for example, Formorian taking most of the damage.
Also, on this backstory you imply that Formorian and Mac were basically formed by Yasu giving in to darkness during the fight against the heartless swarm. But, cross checking, Mac's background implies that Yasu was consumed by the heartless themselves rather than by his own darkness. This is a minor detail for the most part, but I'd like it cleared up for the sake of consistency. Swarms of heartless at that world in particularly, or at any world, would 95% of the time be emblem heartless and thus produce and emblem heartless too, but I can let that detail slide.
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Post by dandy on Oct 19, 2010 11:52:12 GMT -5
For the power, I mean that they don't need my permission to wreck the bugger on the inside, with no consequences on the master's part. And by that I mean that this will be up the to the “master’s”part: anything from not being to fight to complete immobility for a while.As for the permission thing, I meant to say that after disabling it would be easy to kill the roboheartless, but there's obviously the common sense courtesy of player killing.
As for damage, the idea would be that master takes the same damage that Fomorian takes, but with the nonmechanical equivalent. A chuck of metal getting blown of the arm is like a gash, for example. It wouldn’t be like the opponent trying to take down the master, but them trying to take down the giant. So in a way, this is like a defense boost for the master, hence the armor in the title.
And on to background, I thought the changing of the heart was implied, and that's what fighting Heartless generally did to you; I thought I was elaborating what happened. I’m really trying to do that best I can with keeping things authentic, but the wiki is all I’m using. I hate the series in the first place, and thus will not go through any the games them twice to scour for details like that.
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Post by Lagunamov on Oct 20, 2010 10:49:53 GMT -5
Ok, that settles the skill questions. I will help clarify a couple of details though, for the background before accepting this.
Fighting Heartless per se doesn't affect a person's heart. It is the actual choices a person does that does that. Heartless are formed in two/three different ways, as you might have read on the wiki: A pureblood is formed out of the darkness in a person's heart, usually when said persons falls, gives in or is consumed by darkness for X reason. Emblems are formed in either two different ways: with a machine, or by having the heart stolen by an Emblem heartless.
That's the main issue I needed to clarified. If he was consumed by his own darkness during the fight, then it makes sense to have a Pureblood. If not, if he was defeated by Heartless and had his heart stolen, then Formorian should be an Emblem one.
"However, it wasn’t long before he was overwhelmed by a swarm of heartless and consumed." That implies his Heart was stolen, thus Formorian should be Emblem. I'm looking out for consistency here.
As a last note, unrelated to Formorian. If you hate the KH series to begin with, why exactly did you join the site? Not that we mind, but it IS unusual.
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Post by dandy on Oct 20, 2010 12:03:37 GMT -5
Avarice Entropy told me to come here, and he’s a nice a guy. And I decied I want to stay because Aerith was cool.
Alright, then Mac'll just be consumed by his own darkness; more dramatic.
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Post by Lagunamov on Oct 20, 2010 14:49:53 GMT -5
Alright.
Accepted, Locked and in 5 seconds Moved.
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