Post by Nothingness on Mar 13, 2011 21:48:18 GMT -5
Alright, time to get these upgrades out of the way. First, for Raen. I believe that, what with the recent plot threads, I have over 5 plot points. So, I'm taking this opportunity to boost:
Next, a change to Clive's profile, and a new ability! Under physical aspects, please replace the old info with this:
Also, could you please change the name of the ability "Self-Awareness" to "Situational Awareness".
And, lastly, let's give Viola a nice new ability that goes along with her specialty: shouting.
Also, if you don't mind replacing the Abilities Section with this:
That should take up 300 munny, and 5 PP.
[b]Defensive Blow[/b]
You swing your weapon and then gather yourself into a blocking position, making yourself harder to damage. Until your next post, all damage you are dealt is reduced by two effectiveness points. All regular physical attacks deal no damage and cause stagger for several seconds, Weak abilities deal damage slightly below that of a physical attack and a two second stagger, Moderate abilities deal weak damage, Strong deal Moderate damage, and super-Strong deal Strong damage.
Range: Melee
Speed: Swing speed
Cooldown: 4 posts
Uses: 3 uses
Strength: Moderate
Next, a change to Clive's profile, and a new ability! Under physical aspects, please replace the old info with this:
Clive stands in at 5'10", weighing about 170 lb. His hair is a curly black mess that stops at his nape and covers his ears, and has since shaven off the stubble that once darkened his face. His gray eyes look dull, but have gained a small amount of light, making them seem a bit softer than the harsh, steely-look of before. His face is of a fairly normal shape with a sharp jawline and a thin nose, although it's apparent that his nose been broken more than once before by an indent in the center. Sporting black pants with a brown leather belt, brown leather boots, and a white dress shirt with the top three buttons undone, he appears much more approachable. His body is tan, very fit, and his skin has a rough look to it not counting the various scars on his back. On his left ring finger is his gold wedding band--the last thing he owns of his former life. On his right forearm is a golden bangle with the image of an hourglass engraved on it.
Also, could you please change the name of the ability "Self-Awareness" to "Situational Awareness".
[b]Retribution[/b]
Having found peace within himself, and having sided with the Light, Clive can now transfer the wounds of others to himself, thereby healing them. However, he can also transfer his wounds to others, healing himself while harming the other. He must make physical contact for this to work, however, and will only work with most bruises and small cuts. He can choose how many, or how few injuries are transferred.
Range: N/A
Speed: Instantaneous
Cooldown: Two posts
Uses: Four per thread
Strength: Weak
And, lastly, let's give Viola a nice new ability that goes along with her specialty: shouting.
[b]ORDER: Bravery[/b]
Calling out to all those fighting with her, Viola raises their spirits with her words, stoking the fires of bravery lying dormant within each of them. This order increases the strength and defense of those that hear her by 50% for two posts after the order is issued. This will only affect those truly fighting for her--any traitors will not receive the effects.
Range: Within earshot (situational)
Speed: N/A
Cooldown: Six posts
Uses: Infinite
Strength: Weak
Also, if you don't mind replacing the Abilities Section with this:
[B]ABILITIES SECTION[/B]: Having the heart of a true leader, Viola's words can boost the abilities those fighting with her, and awaken their fighting spirit. However, as with any command, she can't issue more than one at a time, and must wait until the current Order's effect runs out before using another.
That should take up 300 munny, and 5 PP.