Post by Oathkeeper Emi on Mar 29, 2011 12:05:01 GMT -5
It's time for Caroline to stop being a whiny baby and become the most badass powerful character I have. Muahahha.
First of all, purchasing 4 STRONG abilities.
[Knight Drive]
Caroline touches the cross necklace around her neck and says a short prayer, and then her knight form is activated. Her normal outfit is replaced by a full suit of armor, complete with a beautifully engraved breastplate. While in Knight Form, she can use certain abilities and also has double defense against physical and magical attacks and double strength at the cost of her speed being cut in half and the loss of her ability to use certain abilities. This form lasts for three posts or until she dismisses it. In order to be able to continue to use this form, Caroline must strictly adhere to the code she was given at the time she was blessed. The more she breaks the code, the less effectively she is able to use this form and her other abilities until she is forgiven. This ability is connected to Chastity (Castitas) and weakened by Lust (Luxuria).
Range N/A
Speed The transformation happens instantaneously.
Cooldown: Three posts
Uses: Twice per battle
Strength: Strong
[Heavenfire]
Only available in knight form.
Caroline calls a column of fire from the sky down on a single target. The fire doesn't consume them, but deals strong damage. This ability is connected to Patience (Patientia) and weakened by Wrath (Ira).
Range: The target must be within ten feet of Caroline.
Speed: The fire takes only a few seconds to reach its target.
Cooldown: 3 posts
Uses: Twice per battle
Strength: Strong
[Hands of Elijah]
Available outside of knight form, but only half as effective.
Caroline touches an injured or sick person and can heal up to strong damage after saying a short prayer. She must be touching them and must not be interrupted during the one post process, so it's not very effective during a battle. When she is not in knight form, she can only heal up to weak damage. This ability is connected to Charity (Caritas) and weakened by Greed (Avaritia).
Range: Close contact- Caroline must be touching the person.
Speed: Takes one post to complete.
Cooldown: 3 posts
Uses: Twice per thread
Strength: Strong
[Hands of Elisha]
Only available in knight form.
Caroline says a short prayer and waves her hand in the direction of a single target. That target is stricken with blindness that lasts for 4 complete posts or until she dismisses it. This ability also allows her to heal any blind status effects whether she inflicted it or not. This ability is connected to Humility (Humilitas) and weakened by Pride (Suberbia).
Range: The target must be within six feet of Caroline.
Speed: Blindness is instaneous, as is the healing.
Cooldown: 3 posts
Uses: Once per thread for both infliction and healing.
Strength: Strong
I think that should be 2400 munny. In addition, I need to add a note to her two previously existing abilities that say "Not available in knight form".
Please remove Derringer as her weapon and replace it with the following:
Augustine
A simple, lightweight sword, with a 28 inch steel blade, a brass guard and a grip made of polished ebony. It is present on Caroline's hip even when she isn't in knight form, and held in a sheath of black leather over wood. One each side of the blade, there are words engraved. One side reads "Castitas-Temperantia-Caritas-Industria-Patientia-Humanitas-Humilitas" and the other side reads "Luxuria-Gula-Avaritia-Acedia-Ira-Invidia-Superbia", representative of the seven heavenly virtues Caroline must abide by and the seven deadly sins she must avoid.
Under her Persona, please insert the following.
In order to use her abilities, Caroline must abide by a strict code of conduct based around the seven heavenly virtues and seven deadly sins. Each virtue has a corresponding vice. If Caroline commits one of the sins or fails to adhere to one of the virutes, she will lose some of her power until she prays for forgiveness. (All explanations taken from Wikipedia or dictionary.com)
[li]Chastity (Casititas):
Abstaining from sexual conduct according to one's state in life. Cleanliness through cultivated good health and hygiene, and maintained by refraining from intoxicants. To be honest with oneself, one's family, one's friends, and to all of humanity. Embracing of moral wholesomeness and achieving purity of thought-through education and betterment. The ability to refrain from being distracted and influenced by hostility, temptation or corruption.
Corresponding Vice: Lust (Luxuria)
A passionate or overmastering desire or craving. (Usually described as sexual desire or craving, but can also be for power or other things.)
Corresponding Ability: [Knight Drive]
[/li][li]Temperance (Temperantia):
Restraint, temperance, justice. Constant mindfulness of others and one's surroundings; practicing self-control, abstention, moderation, and deferred gratification. Prudence to judge between actions with regard to appropriate actions at a given time. Proper moderation between self-interest, versus public-interest, and against the rights and needs of others.
Corresponding Vice: Gluttony (Gula)
Over-indulgence and over-consumption of food, drink, or intoxicants to the point of waste. Includes eating before the time of meals, exceeding the nessecary amount of food or drink, taking food or drink with too much eagerness, eating food that is too costly or elaborately prepared, or witholding food/drink from those who need it.
[/li][li]Charity (Caritas):
Generosity, charity, self-sacrifice. Unlimited loving and kindness to all.
Corresponding Vice: Greed (Avaritia)
Excessive or rapacious desire, especially for wealth or possessions
Corresponding Ability: [Hands of Elijah]
[/li][li]Diligence (Industria):
A zealous and careful nature in one's actions and work; decisive work ethic, steadfastness in belief, fortitude, and the capability of not giving up. Budgeting one's time; monitoring one's own activities to guard against laziness. Upholding one's convictions at all times, especially when no one else is watching (integrity).
Corresponding Vice: Sloth (Acedia)
Spiritual or emotional apathy, neglecting what God has spoken, and being physically and emotionally inactive.
[/li][li]Patience (Patientia):
Forbearance and endurance through moderation. Resolving conflicts and injustice peacefully, as opposed to resorting to violence. The ability to forgive; to show mercy to sinners. Creating a sense of peaceful stability and community, rather than engendering suffering, hostility and antagonism.
Corresponding Vice: Wrath (Ira)
Strong, stern, or fierce anger; deeply resentful indignation; ire;
Vengeance or punishment as the consequence of anger.
Corresponding Ability: [Heavenfire]
[/li][li]Kindness (Humanitas):
Charity, compassion and friendship for its own sake. Empathy and trust without prejudice or resentment. Unselfish love and voluntary kindness without bias or spite. Having positive outlooks and cheerful demeanor; to inspire kindness in others.
Corresponding Vice: Envy (Invidia)
A feeling of discontent or covetousness with regard to another's advantages, success, possessions, etc.
[/li][li]Humility (Humilitas):
Modest behavior, selflessness, and the giving of respect. Humility is not thinking less of yourself, it is thinking of yourself less. The courage of the heart necessary to undertake tasks which are difficult, tedious or unglamorous, and to graciously accept the sacrifices involved. Reverence for those who have wisdom and those who selflessly teach in love. Giving credit where credit is due; not unfairly glorifying one's own self. Being faithful to promises, no matter how big or small they may be. Refraining from despair and the ability to confront fear and uncertainty, or intimidation
Corresponding Vice: Pride (Suberbia)
a high or inordinate opinion of one's own dignity, importance, merit, or superiority, whether as cherished in the mind or as displayed in bearing, conduct, etc.
Corresponding Ability: [Hands of Elisha][/li][/ul]
I have a few other changes to make, to her personality/history and other small information which I will take care of myself to save you all the trouble.
First of all, purchasing 4 STRONG abilities.
[Knight Drive]
Caroline touches the cross necklace around her neck and says a short prayer, and then her knight form is activated. Her normal outfit is replaced by a full suit of armor, complete with a beautifully engraved breastplate. While in Knight Form, she can use certain abilities and also has double defense against physical and magical attacks and double strength at the cost of her speed being cut in half and the loss of her ability to use certain abilities. This form lasts for three posts or until she dismisses it. In order to be able to continue to use this form, Caroline must strictly adhere to the code she was given at the time she was blessed. The more she breaks the code, the less effectively she is able to use this form and her other abilities until she is forgiven. This ability is connected to Chastity (Castitas) and weakened by Lust (Luxuria).
Range N/A
Speed The transformation happens instantaneously.
Cooldown: Three posts
Uses: Twice per battle
Strength: Strong
[Heavenfire]
Only available in knight form.
Caroline calls a column of fire from the sky down on a single target. The fire doesn't consume them, but deals strong damage. This ability is connected to Patience (Patientia) and weakened by Wrath (Ira).
Range: The target must be within ten feet of Caroline.
Speed: The fire takes only a few seconds to reach its target.
Cooldown: 3 posts
Uses: Twice per battle
Strength: Strong
[Hands of Elijah]
Available outside of knight form, but only half as effective.
Caroline touches an injured or sick person and can heal up to strong damage after saying a short prayer. She must be touching them and must not be interrupted during the one post process, so it's not very effective during a battle. When she is not in knight form, she can only heal up to weak damage. This ability is connected to Charity (Caritas) and weakened by Greed (Avaritia).
Range: Close contact- Caroline must be touching the person.
Speed: Takes one post to complete.
Cooldown: 3 posts
Uses: Twice per thread
Strength: Strong
[Hands of Elisha]
Only available in knight form.
Caroline says a short prayer and waves her hand in the direction of a single target. That target is stricken with blindness that lasts for 4 complete posts or until she dismisses it. This ability also allows her to heal any blind status effects whether she inflicted it or not. This ability is connected to Humility (Humilitas) and weakened by Pride (Suberbia).
Range: The target must be within six feet of Caroline.
Speed: Blindness is instaneous, as is the healing.
Cooldown: 3 posts
Uses: Once per thread for both infliction and healing.
Strength: Strong
[b][Knight Drive][/b]
Caroline touches the cross necklace around her neck and says a short prayer, and then her knight form is activated. Her normal outfit is replaced by a full suit of armor, complete with a beautifully engraved breastplate. While in Knight Form, she can use certain abilities and also has double defense against physical and magical attacks and double strength at the cost of her speed being cut in half and the loss of her ability to use certain abilities. This form lasts for three posts or until she dismisses it. In order to be able to continue to use this form, Caroline must strictly adhere to the code she was given at the time she was blessed. The more she breaks the code, the less effectively she is able to use this form and her other abilities until she is forgiven. This ability is connected to Chastity (Castitas) and weakened by Lust (Luxuria).
[b]Range[/b] N/A
[b]Speed[/b] The transformation happens instantaneously.
[b]Cooldown:[/b] Three posts
[b]Uses:[/b] Twice per battle
[b]Strength:[/b] Strong
[b][Heavenfire][/b]
Only available in knight form.
Caroline calls a column of fire from the sky down on a single target. The fire doesn't consume them, but deals strong damage. This ability is connected to Patience (Patientia) and weakened by Wrath (Ira).
[b]Range:[/b] The target must be within ten feet of Caroline.
[b]Speed:[/b] The fire takes only a few seconds to reach its target.
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Uses:[/b] Twice per battle
[b]Strength:[/b] Strong
[b][Hands of Elijah][/b]
Available outside of knight form, but only half as effective.
Caroline touches an injured or sick person and can heal up to strong damage after saying a short prayer. She must be touching them and must not be interrupted during the one post process, so it's not very effective during a battle. When she is not in knight form, she can only heal up to weak damage. This ability is connected to Charity (Caritas) and weakened by Greed (Avaritia).
[b]Range:[/b] Close contact- Caroline must be touching the person.
[b]Speed:[/b] Takes one post to complete.
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Uses:[/b] Twice per thread
[b]Strength:[/b] Strong
[b][Hands of Elisha][/b]
Only available in knight form.
Caroline says a short prayer and waves her hand in the direction of a single target. That target is stricken with blindness that lasts for 4 complete posts or until she dismisses it. This ability also allows her to heal any blind status effects whether she inflicted it or not. This ability is connected to Humility (Humilitas) and weakened by Pride (Suberbia).
[b]Range:[/b] The target must be within six feet of Caroline.
[b]Speed:[/b] Blindness is instaneous, as is the healing.
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Uses:[/b] Once per thread for both infliction and healing.
[b]Strength:[/b] StrongI think that should be 2400 munny. In addition, I need to add a note to her two previously existing abilities that say "Not available in knight form".
Please remove Derringer as her weapon and replace it with the following:
Augustine
A simple, lightweight sword, with a 28 inch steel blade, a brass guard and a grip made of polished ebony. It is present on Caroline's hip even when she isn't in knight form, and held in a sheath of black leather over wood. One each side of the blade, there are words engraved. One side reads "Castitas-Temperantia-Caritas-Industria-Patientia-Humanitas-Humilitas" and the other side reads "Luxuria-Gula-Avaritia-Acedia-Ira-Invidia-Superbia", representative of the seven heavenly virtues Caroline must abide by and the seven deadly sins she must avoid.
[b][url=http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h363/oathkeeperemi/sword.jpg]Augustine[/url][/b]
A simple, lightweight sword, with a 28 inch steel blade, a brass guard and a grip made of polished ebony. It is present on Caroline's hip even when she isn't in knight form, and held in a sheath of black leather over wood. One each side of the blade, there are words engraved. One side reads "Castitas-Temperantia-Caritas-Industria-Patientia-Humanitas-Humilitas" and the other side reads "Luxuria-Gula-Avaritia-Acedia-Ira-Invidia-Superbia", representative of the seven heavenly virtues Caroline must abide by and the seven deadly sins she must avoid.Under her Persona, please insert the following.
In order to use her abilities, Caroline must abide by a strict code of conduct based around the seven heavenly virtues and seven deadly sins. Each virtue has a corresponding vice. If Caroline commits one of the sins or fails to adhere to one of the virutes, she will lose some of her power until she prays for forgiveness. (All explanations taken from Wikipedia or dictionary.com)
[li]Chastity (Casititas):
Abstaining from sexual conduct according to one's state in life. Cleanliness through cultivated good health and hygiene, and maintained by refraining from intoxicants. To be honest with oneself, one's family, one's friends, and to all of humanity. Embracing of moral wholesomeness and achieving purity of thought-through education and betterment. The ability to refrain from being distracted and influenced by hostility, temptation or corruption.
Corresponding Vice: Lust (Luxuria)
A passionate or overmastering desire or craving. (Usually described as sexual desire or craving, but can also be for power or other things.)
Corresponding Ability: [Knight Drive]
[/li][li]Temperance (Temperantia):
Restraint, temperance, justice. Constant mindfulness of others and one's surroundings; practicing self-control, abstention, moderation, and deferred gratification. Prudence to judge between actions with regard to appropriate actions at a given time. Proper moderation between self-interest, versus public-interest, and against the rights and needs of others.
Corresponding Vice: Gluttony (Gula)
Over-indulgence and over-consumption of food, drink, or intoxicants to the point of waste. Includes eating before the time of meals, exceeding the nessecary amount of food or drink, taking food or drink with too much eagerness, eating food that is too costly or elaborately prepared, or witholding food/drink from those who need it.
[/li][li]Charity (Caritas):
Generosity, charity, self-sacrifice. Unlimited loving and kindness to all.
Corresponding Vice: Greed (Avaritia)
Excessive or rapacious desire, especially for wealth or possessions
Corresponding Ability: [Hands of Elijah]
[/li][li]Diligence (Industria):
A zealous and careful nature in one's actions and work; decisive work ethic, steadfastness in belief, fortitude, and the capability of not giving up. Budgeting one's time; monitoring one's own activities to guard against laziness. Upholding one's convictions at all times, especially when no one else is watching (integrity).
Corresponding Vice: Sloth (Acedia)
Spiritual or emotional apathy, neglecting what God has spoken, and being physically and emotionally inactive.
[/li][li]Patience (Patientia):
Forbearance and endurance through moderation. Resolving conflicts and injustice peacefully, as opposed to resorting to violence. The ability to forgive; to show mercy to sinners. Creating a sense of peaceful stability and community, rather than engendering suffering, hostility and antagonism.
Corresponding Vice: Wrath (Ira)
Strong, stern, or fierce anger; deeply resentful indignation; ire;
Vengeance or punishment as the consequence of anger.
Corresponding Ability: [Heavenfire]
[/li][li]Kindness (Humanitas):
Charity, compassion and friendship for its own sake. Empathy and trust without prejudice or resentment. Unselfish love and voluntary kindness without bias or spite. Having positive outlooks and cheerful demeanor; to inspire kindness in others.
Corresponding Vice: Envy (Invidia)
A feeling of discontent or covetousness with regard to another's advantages, success, possessions, etc.
[/li][li]Humility (Humilitas):
Modest behavior, selflessness, and the giving of respect. Humility is not thinking less of yourself, it is thinking of yourself less. The courage of the heart necessary to undertake tasks which are difficult, tedious or unglamorous, and to graciously accept the sacrifices involved. Reverence for those who have wisdom and those who selflessly teach in love. Giving credit where credit is due; not unfairly glorifying one's own self. Being faithful to promises, no matter how big or small they may be. Refraining from despair and the ability to confront fear and uncertainty, or intimidation
Corresponding Vice: Pride (Suberbia)
a high or inordinate opinion of one's own dignity, importance, merit, or superiority, whether as cherished in the mind or as displayed in bearing, conduct, etc.
Corresponding Ability: [Hands of Elisha][/li][/ul]
[ul][b]Caroline's Code of Conduct[/b]
In order to use her abilities, Caroline must abide by a strict code of conduct based around the seven heavenly virtues and seven deadly sins. Each virtue has a corresponding vice. If Caroline commits one of the sins or fails to adhere to one of the virutes, she will lose some of her power until she prays for forgiveness. (All explanations taken from Wikipedia or dictionary.com)
[li][b]Chastity (Casititas):[/b]
Abstaining from sexual conduct according to one's state in life. Cleanliness through cultivated good health and hygiene, and maintained by refraining from intoxicants. To be honest with oneself, one's family, one's friends, and to all of humanity. Embracing of moral wholesomeness and achieving purity of thought-through education and betterment. The ability to refrain from being distracted and influenced by hostility, temptation or corruption.
[b]Corresponding Vice:[/b] Lust (Luxuria)
A passionate or overmastering desire or craving. (Usually described as sexual desire or craving, but can also be for power or other things.)
[b]Corresponding Ability:[/b] [Knight Drive]
[/li][li][b]Temperance (Temperantia):[/b]
Restraint, temperance, justice. Constant mindfulness of others and one's surroundings; practicing self-control, abstention, moderation, and deferred gratification. Prudence to judge between actions with regard to appropriate actions at a given time. Proper moderation between self-interest, versus public-interest, and against the rights and needs of others.
[b]Corresponding Vice:[/b] Gluttony (Gula)
Over-indulgence and over-consumption of food, drink, or intoxicants to the point of waste. Includes eating before the time of meals, exceeding the nessecary amount of food or drink, taking food or drink with too much eagerness, eating food that is too costly or elaborately prepared, or witholding food/drink from those who need it.
[/li][li][b]Charity (Caritas):[/b]
Generosity, charity, self-sacrifice. Unlimited loving and kindness to all.
[b]Corresponding Vice:[/b] Greed (Avaritia)
Excessive or rapacious desire, especially for wealth or possessions
[b]Corresponding Ability:[/b] [Hands of Elijah]
[/li][li][b]Diligence (Industria):[/b]
A zealous and careful nature in one's actions and work; decisive work ethic, steadfastness in belief, fortitude, and the capability of not giving up. Budgeting one's time; monitoring one's own activities to guard against laziness. Upholding one's convictions at all times, especially when no one else is watching (integrity).
[b]Corresponding Vice:[/b] Sloth (Acedia)
Spiritual or emotional apathy, neglecting what God has spoken, and being physically and emotionally inactive.
[/li][li][b]Patience (Patientia):[/b]
Forbearance and endurance through moderation. Resolving conflicts and injustice peacefully, as opposed to resorting to violence. The ability to forgive; to show mercy to sinners. Creating a sense of peaceful stability and community, rather than engendering suffering, hostility and antagonism.
[b]Corresponding Vice:[/b] Wrath (Ira)
Strong, stern, or fierce anger; deeply resentful indignation; ire;
Vengeance or punishment as the consequence of anger.
[b]Corresponding Ability:[/b] [Heavenfire]
[/li][li][b]Kindness (Humanitas):[/b]
Charity, compassion and friendship for its own sake. Empathy and trust without prejudice or resentment. Unselfish love and voluntary kindness without bias or spite. Having positive outlooks and cheerful demeanor; to inspire kindness in others.
[b]Corresponding Vice:[/b] Envy (Invidia)
A feeling of discontent or covetousness with regard to another's advantages, success, possessions, etc.
[/li][li][b]Humility (Humilitas):[/b]
Modest behavior, selflessness, and the giving of respect. Humility is not thinking less of yourself, it is thinking of yourself less. The courage of the heart necessary to undertake tasks which are difficult, tedious or unglamorous, and to graciously accept the sacrifices involved. Reverence for those who have wisdom and those who selflessly teach in love. Giving credit where credit is due; not unfairly glorifying one's own self. Being faithful to promises, no matter how big or small they may be. Refraining from despair and the ability to confront fear and uncertainty, or intimidation
[b]Corresponding Vice: [/b]Pride (Suberbia)
a high or inordinate opinion of one's own dignity, importance, merit, or superiority, whether as cherished in the mind or as displayed in bearing, conduct, etc.
[b]Corresponding Ability:[/b] [Hands of Elisha][/li][/ul]
I have a few other changes to make, to her personality/history and other small information which I will take care of myself to save you all the trouble.
