Post by Nothingness on Apr 27, 2011 21:46:36 GMT -5
Yup, as the title says, Clive's in need of a lot of new profile updates, and a new Time ability. Should cost 600 munny total, and, well, here goes!
First off, replace his physical aspects, as well as persona with these with these:
And now, a quick update to his weapons section!
New ability added, too! Also, edit Retribution with this, too, and his Weaknesses section needs to make more sense, as well:
First off, replace his physical aspects, as well as persona with these with these:
[b]Physical Aspects[/b]: Clive stands in at 5'10", weighing about 170 lb. His hair is a curly black mess that stops at his nape and covers his ears, and has since shaven off the stubble that once darkened his face. His gray eyes look dull, but have gained a small amount of light, making them seem a bit softer than the harsh, steely-look of before. His face is of a fairly normal shape with a sharp jawline and a thin nose. Sporting black pants with a brown leather belt, brown leather boots, and a white dress shirt with the top three buttons undone, he appears much more approachable. His body is tan, very fit, and his skin has a rough look to it. On his left ring finger is his gold wedding band--the last thing he owns of his former life. On his right forearm is a golden bangle with the image of an hourglass engraved on it.[b]Persona[/b]:
[ul][li][u]Façade[/u]: Clive no longer shows as much warmth towards people, but also won't show them as much coldness, either. Instead, he shows about as much respect to one person as towards another, unless he happens to be working with them, or working for them. He hasn't forgone redemption, but instead focuses on himself rather than how he wants others to be. He no longer avoids killing, but uses it as his last resort now.
[/li][li][u]Inner Mind[/u]: Stumbling upon a glimpse of self-actualization, Clive has accepted who he is. He's not a killer, not a carpenter, father, or husband anymore. Those are what he was, and those no longer affect him. Clive acts how he sees fit, not binding himself to some sort of title or position. The opinions of others matter little to him now, but doesn't just see things his own way, either. He's willing to sees things other people's way, but that won't immediately change his own opinions.[/li][/ul]And now, a quick update to his weapons section!
[b]Weapon(s)[/b]: Clive wields a pair of [url=http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/f5/Ornamental_katar.jpg]katara[/url], modified with curved metal over the grips to act has hand and wrist guards.New ability added, too! Also, edit Retribution with this, too, and his Weaknesses section needs to make more sense, as well:
[b]Dust to Dust[/b]
When struck by an attack, Clive can stop time for a moment, turning himself to sand and negating the damage. While time is stopped, he can freely position himself somewhere else approximately twenty feet away from where he was originally standing.
Range: Clive reappears within twenty feet of where he was attacked
Speed: Instantaneous
Cooldown: Two posts
Uses: Five per thread
Strength: Strong[b]Retribution[/b]
Clive can transfer the wounds of others to himself, and vice versa. He must make physical contact for this to work and can transfer most injuries, barring serious wounds. Also, Clive can share the physical pain of another person as well, lessening it for the recipient. He can choose which wounds he wants to transfer, as well as how much of a wound. Can be used in conjunction with Dust to Dust, but can only inflict the wound he himself was going to take, and costs two uses as well as a double cooldown on his Time abilities.
Range: N/A
Speed: Instantaneous
Cooldown: Two posts
Uses: Four per thread
Strength: Moderate[b]Elemental Weakness[/b]: Water
[b]Other Weaknesses[/b]: None
